some countries, the use of renewable source of energy such as solar and wind energy are encouraged. Is it positive or negative?
The usage of fossil fuel and coal has become more popular in some countries in the globe. However, natural energy like, solar power and wind energy are accepted by some countries. I believe, it has more benefits in using renewable source of energy than that of oil and coal.
It is inevitable that, renewable sources cannot be seen a wastage after it’s process. Therefore, it is common for many countries to intend for renewable energy that has no harm for the environment. On the other hand, If the countries continue to use Oil and coal further that affect high environmental pollution and scarcity of the supply as it needs more time to regenerate. For instance, recent study done at a London University reveals that if we continue to use fossil fuel for another two decades, it can supply just 2% of the fuel demand in the world.
In addition, the importance of natural sources proved the plenty of availability which leads for continuous supply. People do not want to think twice before use natural sources as it is easy to supply from anywhere. There can be seen some features in wind power plants and solar power generators to store the energy to use in the time when the input get reduced. Moreover, Solar power and wind power are more convenience for the people and those are more efficient as they have no wastage product at the end. The Australian newspaper article revealed that solar power and wind power can replace 99% of the oil and coal requirement in the globe.
To conclude, many countries tend to use oil and coal for generate their essential energy while, others are benefited more by using renewable energy. However, I believe the green energy has more benefits including environmental friendly and no wastage products at the end of the process.
- some countries, the use of renewable source of energy such as solar and wind energy are encouraged. Is it positive or negative? 73
- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ntinue to use Oil and coal further that affect high environmental pollution and scarcity of...
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Line 13, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age products at the end of the process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54229883227 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7076404771 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290346716073 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118209988729 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104913152721 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213393827573 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108818692686 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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