Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Online purchasing has become more popular in today’s society. Books, air tickets and groceries are some popular items on the internet. I believe advantages of online purchasing outweigh the disadvantages.
It is true to say that online-marketing save time of consumers as they do not want to travel to the shops and wasting time for selecting the correct item. The buyers can select whatever they want at their home. Not only that, it has variety of choices. People can chose their required item comparing with large number of options. For instance, the US government survey report in 2018 reveals, more than 60% of US citizens are prefer for online shopping rather than purchasing at super market.
One disadvantage of online purchasing is it’s taking more time to reach to the customer and some items cannot purchase by this method like fresh vegetables or fruits items. So it cannot applicable for every purchasing. Another disadvantage of this is some items in the internet are not as the same way when it arrive. Online websites like ebay, ali express, ali baba.com having many reviews from customers about incorrect item or differences of the received item with ordered one.
To conclude, online shopping benefits for the people as it is more convenient and available number of selections. However, it has some disadvantages of that it is not suitable for every purchasing and sometimes the ordered items are different than it present in online. So I think it has more benefits than the negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: preferred
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Message: Did you mean 'arrives'?
Suggestion: arrives
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...metimes the ordered items are different than it present in online. So I think it has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.116 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80179656649 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7066964785 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20949681838 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775948611479 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752724961241 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147819219374 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933640846637 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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