In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between
finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Gap year or sabbatical year is quite popular in developed country. It is the period of time between finishing high school and starting university studies that young people spent traveling or working. Besides bringing many benefits, gap year is also contains a lot of disadvantage.
To begin with, taking a gap year can give young people an opportunity to discover their true passion and think about the major they will study at the university. Nowadays many young people cannot identify the person they want to be in the future because of the learning pressure and time consuming on video games and social networks. Secondly, gap year helps young people to improve their skill for the college life. This gives them a chance to communicate, socialize and improve their attitude. After a gap year the future freshman will become more mature and well-prepare for the long journey waiting ahead. Last but not least, the gap year provide a completely different way to learn. Instead of simply reading a book, they learn from experience and failure.
Beside the advantage it brings, gap year also has many disadvantages. Firstly, the cost of a gap year is relatively expensive and not everyone can afford it. Many young people choose to have a part-time job as a gap year to save money. Moreover, taking a gap year can be very stressful from the talk and countless things to do. Homesickness and anxiety about the future make it difficult for many people to fully complete it. The gap year, in a positive or negative way, possibly change your life forever
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20 24 in one European country over a two year period 84
- Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30 Is it a positive or negative development 84
- In some countries only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music Why Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...popular in developed country. It is the period of time between finishing high school and start...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57544561391 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1458263657 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246930378413 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866220814215 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744991093675 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18476753803 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025808335658 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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