In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy.
What are the causes?
What can be done to address this situation?
Nowadays, we live in a peaceful time in which future generations have better living conditions, but some of them feel unpleasant about it. This essay will provide reasonable reasons and suitable solutions to fix this phenomenon.
First of all, it is true that young people are playing too much on electric devices such as laptops, smartphones, so on and this causes a bad habit in them. They will have less sleep or even quitting naps time to play videos games. As a result, they wake up with a feeling dizzy, headache, and bored which makes their days look like a shady color because they can not works or plays with full energy. This makes them feel less happy and their emotion become worse. Moreover, in some wealthy households, some parents spend time working nearly all day and do not have enough time for taking care of their children. Thus, their kids will grow up without emotions from family members, and they will want to have more attention from everyone and if parents do not share time play with them, they will get depression or even autism.
On the other hand, there are some recommendations to prevent this situation. Parents need to sit with them, listen to their feelings and problems, and give them some advice so they can solve and understand. This makes their trust in the family better, less feel isolated in their homes, and becomes more mature in the future's path. Furthermore, schools should organize some entertainment activities which help young children have a chance to play along together, make friends, and improve their social skills.
In conclusion, modern society has both benefits and drawbacks which play an important role in young people's unhappiness. However, we can deal with this issue with certain solutions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...like a shady color because they can not works or plays with full energy. This makes t...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'futures'' or 'future's'?
Suggestion: futures'; future's
...r homes, and becomes more mature in the futures path. Furthermore, schools should organ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92567567568 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44213530249 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9616616731 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206922375403 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805202322237 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260532063747 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127158004904 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276637536954 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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