In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy.
What are the causes?
What can be done to address this situation?
It is ironic that although teenagers nowadays are wealthier, more secure and healthier, they are less joyful as their parents did. I believe this is because of the pressure that parents put on their kids, and they must take steps to mitigate these problems.
First of all, one of the causes is that parents put too much expectation and pressure on their children. Many parents demand their kids to be the best that sometimes they just can’t just for the sake of honor. Therefore, the children are struggled with all these pressures that their parents have made. For instance, Asian-moms always force their kids must bring A band score to home; Otherwise, they will be blamed or even a punishment for it. Secondly, adolescents nowadays seem no longer to have freedom anymore. They can not do something that they really want to do since they have to listen to their parents. In other words, parents have banned children’s dream. As a result, there is undoubtedly made some negative consequences such as depression or even a much worse scenario.
However, there are several actions that parents could do to solve these problems described above. Firstly, parents should be friends with their children, pay more attention and sympathize with their kids to make them feel like they are protected by their children, therefore, they could have a memorable childhood. A second measure would be for parents to encourage their kids to learn all the skills that they want to, thus, all their potential will be fully developed to be more successful than others. For example, Elon Musk, who has a burning ambition about space, is now one of the pioneers in the exploration of space.
In conclusion, tension and lack of freedom are the two main reasons for these problems and there are various measures that parents can take to tackle this problems for their kids to have a memorable childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97169811321 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54562613368 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4545438384 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143628882681 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558977958102 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342024033274 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097380514941 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233379009432 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.