In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?
In certain traditions, youngsters are being taught that hard work is the key to success. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the pros and cons of this message.
Firstly, there are several advantages of working hard by pupils. Hard work increases the academic performance of the child, ultimately boosts the confidence of the child. It arises the curiosity among children to achieve various goals in life and how to safely overcome the hurdles of life. For instance- marks scored by a student by his hard work on learning concepts of any subject boost the morale and directs him to achieve ambitions easily with this same ability. Moreover, pupil can compete with any person in life and will certainly transforms them in productive member of the society. Furthermore, it helps to maximize the potential of student by working on his weak sections. Hence, hard work is responsible for building the positive outlook of life and broadening the knowledge.
However, there are few disadvantages also. In this competitive world a lot of other things are essential for achieving success such as smartwork, good communication level and many more, which cannot be overruled by only hard work. For example- if a pupil prepares for competitive exam give his whole day to study the concepts and materials rather than dividing the time to learn new concepts , doing derivations, which eventually reduce the scores . Therefore, children cannot merely depend on hard work for fulfilling their dreams.
To conclude, hard work is crucial for fulfilling the ambitions as it fosters the child with confidence and sense of excellence , however, smart study is also necessary to compete successfully in this contemporary world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21376811594 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8280183157 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0593835262 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132304341695 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503969889739 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292081585482 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762648540403 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277326383436 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.