In some cultures the old age is highly valued, while in some cultures youth is highly valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People hold different opinions on the role of the elderly and the youth in the development of a country. While some countries highly appreciate the old age, others value the youth. Personally, I believe that both of the age groups are equal importance in socio-economic development.
On the one hand, it is apparent that the contribution of senior citizens to the unity of society is undeniable. The first reason for this is that the older generation has been considered as mentors and inspirers for youngsters based on their life and work experiences. For example, in families, parents and grandparents can give their offsprings pieces of advice to tackle various difficulties in the life. Also, with their prestige, they are important consultants for organizations and businesses. Another reason is that the elderly have been dedicated their whole life to nurturing children in their family and working for fulfilling the responsibilities at work and in society. For these sacrifices, it is important for communities to treat them with respect.
On the other hand, it is common knowledge that the young generations play a vital role as the creators and shapers of a nation’s tomorrow. Firstly, with being full of energetic and enthusiastic, the likelihood of the youth creating a huge source of well-educated and well-trained labour is high, which is a motivator to boost national productivity. This vibrant workforce would bring potential benefits in which the government could allocate other resources to developing their country effectively. Secondly, in the digital era with advances in technology that have made fundamental changes to the way life operates, younger people are more creative and can respond quickly to these innovations. To illustrate this, various jobs nowadays done automatically by computers, machines and online platforms could offer the youth more opportunities to find new methods for the tasks instead of traditional measures. For this reason, it is essential that investing in the youth development needs to be high on governments’ agenda.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both the elderly and young people have equally significant impacts on the prosperity of a country.<br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40517241379 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21239563741 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7784536157 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11411279327 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443471484701 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823781870682 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092086117451 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105732971125 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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