A generation ago, There was period when no one cared about significance of youngster, But now this has been vanished for our culture. Apart from this there are countries like America, Canada, Australia who's culture say's old people are more valueable then the youth. In my view both the elder's and youth has its own shine in plethora of traditions.
To initiate, Age is just a number. Therefore, A human who give ideas to another person is supposed to me a important part of the society. Moreover, Elder people are well known for their guidelines, They reflect a light for youngster pathway with their experiences. For instance An survey which was conducted by South America which detailed that adults who were guided by their grand parents,experties(of old age group) were more confident and aggressive about their future.
on the contrary, We live in 21st century, which is an historic era itself. We have advancement of technology, education, skills and many more things. Youth of this generation is given more response because of their skills and energy. They are very focused about their goals they are more enthusiastic .For example Earlier In India, students were mainly pursuing non-medical, Medical stream. They were urge by their parents to choose this particular field, Although most of them were not intrested. Whereas, Todays youngster follow what their heart says. They have no obstacles.
To sum up, In my opinion both old and youth people have their own importance. Earlier aged person can show a pathway by sharing his experiences whereas adult these have that abilty to accomplish what they need in life.
- Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? 73
- Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? 73
- Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
- Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? 56
- Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59259259259 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.92433386463 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646090534979 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.508827108 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.8 106.682146367 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 7.06120827912 453% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153079956823 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815039715558 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457537326882 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990799457796 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253417130541 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.0946893788 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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