In some cultures old age people are highly valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Every nation has their different tradition and norms. Similarly, aged people get high respect in some cultures, while in otheres youngsters are considered more valued. In this essay, I will discuss both the perspectives and then form my own opinion.
Proponents of first view point contend that old people have more experience and wise knowledge as they have come-accrossed many situation throughout their life. World can get great benefit from their experience. So, due to huge knowledge and precious experience they are respected more in society. Moreover, they claim that grown onse also sacrifice their whole life in order to provide better life to their offsprings. They have done lot of hard work to make their children's future bright. Consequently, they do not get high respect, they earn it through their hardships for their new coming generations.
Advocates of second view point maintain that youngsters are back-bone of a nation, they are future of nation. They will becom the future doctors,teachers,engineers and will contribute in development of nation. As the development of of nation is fully dependent on its youth, as a result they get more respect . Furthermore, they argued that youngsters also have adapted with technology in far better way, whereas old ones are still grappling to learn fundamental use of technology. So, they have a notion that old people have served enough as they can and now all the spotlight should be on the youngsters because they are the coming future of nation.
In my opinion, old population get huge respect in society owing to their wise wisdom and better eyesight. They also make world better place to live for their coming generations. Whereas youngsters are considered future of a nation with strength to adapt with new technology that is why they are more valued in some cultures. I think that, the respect of different age groups is different according to the mindset and expectations towards them by society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, still, then, whereas, while, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14953271028 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.940409998 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520249221184 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7536150292 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137185824673 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512097009995 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077887831963 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123016287383 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115465438919 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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