People’s opinions varied, about the role and importance of arts subjects such as music, drama, and craft in the secondary schools, but most of them were inclined in their opinion that should be made compulsory within the curriculum of secondary students. In fact, this opinion represents me because I believe that these subjects have an important role in developing community and professional skills.
There are many reasons had made me excited about the existence of compulsory arts programs for secondary school students, first, these subjects give students an opportunity to practice their hobby that may not be able to practice separately at home, and also help them discovering their passion of arts,
as academic study had shown, that a large percentage of people did not know what they were distinguished, because they were not given an opportunity to try some arts during their youth, finally, arts subjects also have an important role acting in trying and perform professions, that could be their future professions.
Not surprisingly, the activities such performing arts theatrical, musical bands or painting lead students to gain other achievements and developing community skills, for example, the activities are helping adolescents to learn work as a team work, and also give them a greater opportunity to be better in studying the curricula of basic subjects, which, the students who often to turn up many arts performances get valuable experiences which quite different with serious learning activities.
In short, it seems to me that arts-based subject should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum, because they have advantages that will help students discover themselves, develop their talents, and choose a suitable future career for them, by identifying the personal skills of each of them.
- Some educationalists argue that non exam arts based subjects such as music drama art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance To what extent do yo 61
- Some educationalists argue that non exam arts based subjects such as music drama art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance To what extent do yo 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to discover' or 'discover'.
Suggestion: to discover; discover
... separately at home, and also help them discovering their passion of arts, as academic stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, for example, in fact, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46126760563 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94935723398 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.421118886 49.4020404114 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.2 106.682146367 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.8 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.4 7.06120827912 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298458339022 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164348975392 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648427582895 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163224843587 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404651720822 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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