Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
learning a foreign language is a basic criteria nowadays. Some people think that students should taught english language during their primary education level instead of being studied in their secondary education. I firmly believe that there is a defensible basis for this argument. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the pros and cons of the issue and explain why i believe in the latter.
The proponent of this view discuss that there are many reasons behind of their claims. The first and foremost is that making the kid learn different language apart from mother language will play crucial role developing their skills. Moreover, if the children will learn english language at the early stage of life, it will not be difficult for them any issue in terms of fluency and coherence. In addition to , students of 4-9 age group has better grasping power. For instance, a survey was conducted among 200 pupils of different age group and it was proven that above mentioned age group children plays a significant role in building character.
On the other hand, despite the upsides of this trajectory, the drawbacks cannot be undetermined. The most important negative impact that occur is on the mother language. The childrens learn other languages more than that of their own mother language, which results in the reduction of the fluency in their own language. apart from this, they also face difficulties in the conversation. The key point to justify this attitude could be illustrated by a personal tangible example. A couple of years ago, I and my grandfather met with my neighbourer son who is 5 years old and is facing a problem to converse in hindi with my grandfather.
To conclude, i believe that this trend of learning a foreign language in primary school is useful in all aspects of life. Though their would be contentious arguments opposing this. I regard this as a positive sign.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, apart from, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70378604634 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1883972187 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237679878092 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696921361455 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585332409424 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14615045429 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451221622796 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.