Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

In this day and age, it is sometimes argued whether children should learn another language at an early age. While some experts think that it is better for kidding to learn a foreign language at elementary school, I personally believe that there are also drawbacks.

There are some reasons why primary school should teach foreign languages to children. Firstly, lingual skill is one of the most essential factors in daily life and it would be easier for anyone to learn a new language at a young age. For example, the way children approach the new language is totally different from adults due to the fact that they have no pressure of learning it for any purposes, and because of that, the interest may grow a little by little. The second reason why this issue is supported is that learning languages from the beginning means children have more time to practice that language so that they can apply it in real life sooner than their peers. Finally, learning new languages helps brain development not only for adults but also for kiddies.

In spite of the above arguments, I also believe that learning foreign languages at a young age has some drawbacks. Unarguably, many parents agree that the schoolday is already long enough, and leaves their children too tired to study another language. In doing so, their children do not have enough time for other activities such as: playing sports, hanging with other kids, and interacting with parents. Furthermore, parents also do not have enough time to review the language lessons with their children along with the present curriculum. Thus, this cannot optimize the effect of the children’s study.

In conclusion, teaching a new language for children at elementary school certainly has its advantages, but I believe that there are also inevitable drawbacks

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02990033223 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53671835482 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544850498339 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4844231763 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384935204226 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151163112332 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102731481317 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254205827112 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653904310171 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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