Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning a foreign language plays a significant role in the growing process of children. As a matter of fact, in recent years, most the parents especially the ones who are from urban areas, reckon the necessity of changing the learning English environment for kids at a very young age. That is why it is controversial that children should commence learning a foreign language at elementary school instead of intermediate/middle school as usual. From my perspective, kids should be gotten in touch with a new language as soon as possible although it has some positive and negative aspects someway.

Initially, it is undeniable that children who have early exposure to learning the second language, are apparently enabled to learn faster as well as easily grasp knowledge. One of the reasons why is because at this stage their brain is like a blank paper, they will obtain in their mind what is taught. Moreover, children can pick up the pronunciation better or enhance their reflection because they are less arrogant and are not afraid of making mistakes. Errors are the foundation of practicing when learning something. If you want to know something inside out or get achievements, do not hesitate to make mistakes.
On the other hand, forcing or abusing children to learn many different languages may backfire in their life. At this period, they are still young so they can not spontaneously afford to learn many subjects because, besides language, they still have other subjects such as maths, mother tongue language, science. It could waste not only their time but also their parent’s support. Furthermore, they will also be pressurized and it somehow causes psychological illness, this kind of disease will baffle their physical and mental development.

In conclusion, learning a new language at a very early stage can bring some benefits and drawbacks. Apart from being easy for them to gain a thorough insight into the language and flourish communication skills, it could raise some disadvantages that they will not have enough time to complete other activities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
... are apparently enabled to learn faster as well as easily grasp knowledge. One of ...
^^
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... are apparently enabled to learn faster as well as easily grasp knowledge. One of ...
^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...d, forcing or abusing children to learn many different languages may backfire in their life. A...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17210682493 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88643664801 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2628240479 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237932210201 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079834447769 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666315160694 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142229300106 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629092014708 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
... are apparently enabled to learn faster as well as easily grasp knowledge. One of ...
^^
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... are apparently enabled to learn faster as well as easily grasp knowledge. One of ...
^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...d, forcing or abusing children to learn many different languages may backfire in their life. A...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17210682493 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88643664801 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2628240479 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237932210201 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079834447769 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666315160694 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142229300106 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629092014708 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.