Childhood is one of the important period in someone's life.People were born like a blank paper without any spot,so their mind can learn and absorb any tiny information from environment.Not only children learn how to act like their parents,but also they learn how to speak their mother tongue and they can be in a relationship by words.
A normal child,s conversation begins when he/she is approximately 12 months.He/She is educated by his/her parents in a normal case.So children first words will be their parents language, but if their parents speak 2 different languages,children will learn both languages.In many cases was observed children get an accent or they use an unrelated foreign word when make sentence.According this topic,some cases were reported that speaking 2 languages by parents makes the lack of speaking ability in children.Because the child confuses to tell his/her needs in which language,so he/she prefers to be silent and uses body languages.Because of this, many parents would rather speak whit their children in just one language.
However,in my opinion,the primary school is more suitable for learning a new language.A child,who is educated in primary school,is going to learn everything from beginning,so learning a foreign language can be one of them too.Besides the primary homework are less than secondary school and a child doesn't feel pressure from learning another language.The children in primary school have got fewer problems and issues to disrupt their concentration.Despite all of these advantages,some parents believe that children in primary school are not ready enough to learn a foreign language and maybe they can not do their homework and over the time they hate to learn,but I believe the place, where they educated must be a happy place and the books should have enough pictures and colors.It will help children to find it joyful and interest to learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31125827815 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20776682329 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 100.0 20.2975951904 493% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.201038131 49.4020404114 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 534.666666667 106.682146367 501% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 100.666666667 20.7667163134 485% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.3333333333 7.06120827912 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255214488089 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158141133439 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120748172782 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158141133439 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120748172782 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.9 13.0946893788 412% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.02 50.2224549098 -60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.3 11.3001002004 374% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.0 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.0 10.1190380762 415% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 42.0 10.7795591182 390% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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