what benefits do traditional celebrations have for society?
Traditional celebrations are very important for society and people. Not only some of famous celebrations have economy benefits for a country but also it is important for native nation. Otherwise, traditional celebrations can display a culture identity. It also could be a break from dailiness and gathering families and connect the generations.
Some traditional celebrations are famous enough to be known whole around the world. These kind of celebrations can attract tourists easily and more tourists for a country means more money for that country and also the individual native people. Tourists occupy in hotels and most of them prefer to eat that country,s traditional food.some of them maybe show their interest to buy some sovenirs. Foods are eaten,tools are bought and money is earned.
Traditions also can be a glance to a country culture. In traditional celebrations people usually wear special costums. They also cooke special food and maybe do special movement or dance which all of them show the culture or maybe display a mythical story. On the other hand they can people feel that they part of something meaningful.
If celebration day was holiday it could be a opportunity for people to escape from their usual routine days and have some fun. They can visit their families and young members can meet their grandparents and do same works for preparing the celebration and how they can connect each others more than ever.
In sum up, people have enjoy the traditional celebrations since ancient age and this is important for them to have fun and feel much alive. It had better to us to respect these celebrations and continue their way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12087912088 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76072885258 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5632405144 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341734810851 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119570753961 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103564861898 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202854566984 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972414526173 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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