Some feel governments, rather than private companies, should be in charge of medical services.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many claim that, government is the better choice to be carried out medical services instead of individual companies.I am completely agreed with this statement because, which would help everyone to achieve high quality health care without any discriminations.
Nowadays,private sector plays a major role in providing medical facilities and hospital support.These companies often makes medical service as a commodification rather than care and health support.Therefore,common people could not afford huge money and they intentionally sacrifice minimal care from undeveloped hospitals. Many government hospitals are failed to achieve advanced medical care facilities due to the influence of private corporates.
Everyone are equally eligible to get advanced and affordable medical care from the nation.Such health services must be distribute through the government agencies or government volunteers without any discernment in gender, caste, or family status.For instance, regional cancer center in Kerala would provide appropriate and modern cancer treatment in all patients equally,irrespective of their money and quality.Likewise, it is often helpful to the common people to entrance every hospitals for their health problems without concern of money.Goverment legislation over medical services are highly appreciable to achieve high quality health care to the people sufficiently.
In conclusion, even though private medical care agencies are able to provide advanced health care to the society,it is often helpful to undergo government rule out over for the maximum services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11210762332 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49646980998 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.725352274 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.6 106.682146367 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166323760828 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102641635526 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.017409583436 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108386846391 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292406887943 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.05 12.4159519038 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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