Some feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While some people believe that the perpetrators are better off in prison for the sake of social comfort, others feel that concerning on their rehabilitation is the most preferred option. There are arguments both sides on both sides which we will discuss here.
On the one side, objectors of criminals undergoing rehabilitation argue that they inflict the majority of societies to feel an excessive anxiety. Predominantly, being a traumatic victim showing sort of overreaction induces public panic, thus, they accuse and mistrust whomever they meet outside. Furthermore, the spread of poor health condition suffered by fellow offenders in jail may be another issue. Perhaps, this could be one of contagious viruses, Tuberculosis, transmitting through air (sneezing and coughing) caused by improper environment. After receiving confinement, those who sicken from such disease hardly get accepted by common community.
On the flip side, exponents of this view claim that rehabilitation, typically residential facilities, helps the offenders gain many skills. Ones releasing from rehabilitation place are still considered to successfully get over the difficulties in living a life compared to perpetrators holding in prison who unfortunately incapable of surviving in social surroundings. In addition, there has been family support for lawbreakers during rehabilitation, so they will not be influenced by prisoners’ gangsters. There is a current statistic of all United State offenders from around 70% after releasing rehabilitative program, only 20% executing other crimes as recidivists.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, giving a better chance to perpetrators is more substantial benefits for social balance, instead of sentencing them in long-term imprisonment. Those include obtaining skilled programs for their career prospect as well as reducing recidivism rate. This is as long as there are preventing ways to infectious diseases during long prison sentences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82698961938 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28080237566 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678200692042 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4850139487 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267402075488 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754711549145 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737351528218 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16271760218 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944571281666 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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