Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
Do you agree or disagree ?
Advertisements have become the main mode of improving sales in recent days, few of the methods practiced to advertise have become less ethical and many cannot be accepted at all. I totally agree with this notion because their are more and more commercials in televisions with irrelevant messages and a relative chunk of advertisers try to attract attention of the public by displaying obscene images.
Firstly, irrelevancy has become common, the big companies add irrelevant subject when planning there ads so that people get thrilled by it such as, a cola company in India known as thumbs-up advertises on the pretext of adventure relating it to their product and the slogan says " Taste the Thunder ". How could any one taste thunder ? Misleading promotions like this can make many believe in wrong taught and ideas. Moreover, many young childrens are mis-guided by such ads and misinterpret a cola as energy drink.
Secondly, obscenity can create attractions hence many ad film makers end-up making such films and commercials which portray women in inappropriate clothing. For example, in recent years all the inner garment manufactures are producing commercials with women wearing them and theses ads are telecast-ed on time at prime timing without any consideration of the young children who might see them.
In conclusion, I believe that it is true that some of the commercials and companies do produce certain advertisements which are irrelevant and misleading along with a few which might be unnecessary and obscene, hence such type of actions are more harmful for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practiced advertising'.
Suggestion: practiced advertising
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cola company in India known as thumbs-up advertises on the pretext of adventure r...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
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Suggestion:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24124513619 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86596653799 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634241245136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8253035897 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104484225221 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360191646412 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426763468151 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655195287065 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448247676616 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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