Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extend do you agree with this view?
It goes without saying that today’s marketing campaign is more and more diverse as companies have tried to convey their messages or products in the most fascinating way. Although they can be interesting or misguiding, thousands of commercials strategies these days are unscrupulous and objectionable. I’m in accord with this argument for the following reasons.
Just as the beginning, I would go as far as to say that exaggerating and unrealistic advertisements are distorted. Exaggeration is an effective and diverted way to advert; however, somehow some of them are unrealistic that misleads viewers. For instance, HTC UK had been promoting the HTC U11 in mid-2017 highlighted the squeeze gestures through the action of a British Olympic diver - Tom Daley jumped from the highest platform of the pool and took a selfie of himself by squeezing the U11 while plunging into the water. Moreover, he’s using the phone normally as going out the water which made viewers think the phone can resist the water from that height. Apparently, this kind of exaggeration should be avoided in any shapes or forms. A small overstated exaggeration is simply a misleading promotion.
Furthermore, it’s excruciatingly frustrating while sensitive plugs interject the show. To illustrate, recently on Youtube, there’s an advert containing sensual visual characters with excessively weird sound effects. This condition is seriously unacceptable and unreasonable since there’re millions of under 18 ages users. Youtube has restricted users’ accessible contents but they haven’t controlled the advertising at all. This issue has been emphatically reported by the Internet, not just the internal Youtube users. Along with this, searching engines should strictly supervise all the commercials by any means.
To draw to a close, I’d like to say that numerous adverts these days are repugnant for society due to their out of line techniques. Every single advertisement should be under severe supervision by all of the platforms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62057877814 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19408192638 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672025723473 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0231214427 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100828286298 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331469238915 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280811637918 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554766885532 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246848672548 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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