Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages
In this day and age, many people who want to get into a museum or an art exhibition are required to pay entrance fees, however, the rest of that procide it at free-of-charge. Although the act of charging visitors to these areas contains both positivity and negativity, the drawbacks overperform the benefits since it can deter many lower-income people from visiting these places
On the one hand, there are several justifications as to why admission fee should be demanded for an exihibition in museums or art galleries to maintain management system as well as facilities stability . In detail, museums and art galleries have been raised fund by government agencies, nonetheless, this budget is relatively limited and unadequate to ensure the effectiveness of museums’operation. Hence, they have to be struggle with different payments such as electric, water bill or staff salary if they do not charge their visitors. In addition, people often show strong preferences toward free goods or services that they do not even need. As a result, since museums are free to enter they are flocked by mass tourisms and local residents, which can cause a host of devastating consequences for them like vandalism or degradation in their amenities
On the other hand, charging any fee to entry can bring a much greater deal of shortcomings for museums and art galleries, when they can become less attractive for low-class people and give inequal chances for different classes in society to absorb more knowledge. Obviously, if museums require people to pay the same amount of money as other entertainment like café or cinema, they will feel hesitate to visit, especially for those people who have tight budget. Moreover, since these people do not afford to go to these places, their opportunities of having deeper insights into the world would also lower than others. As the prominent goal of these museums and art galleries is education and decrease the number of people living under a rock, by demanding entrance fee, they totally fail to accomplish this
To conclude, although selling tickets can help many museums and art galleries to gain more stable source of profit besides the government’s fund, the disadvantages of an admission fee are overshadowed. I am strongly endorse the idea that museums and art galleries should be totally free-of charge to attract more tourists and inhabitants
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16494845361 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95915364501 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.904688645 49.4020404114 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.4 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307435093076 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117345080125 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051988070309 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18954545108 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068260587083 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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