Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages
It is believed by a few individuals that museums and art galleries should charge entry tickets while others argue that it has free entry. In my opinion, this argument has more positives than its drawbacks which will be highlighted in the following paragraphs.
To commence with the advantages of charging admission fees in museums and art galleries. The predominant one is it assists to boost the economy. To explain it, the income collected from these places will go to the government department because it is accounted in under them. Moreover, the entry ticket will also aid to maintain this property and take proper care of its materials. For example, the Taj Mahal is an old museum that looks as it is like it is constructed newly, only because of admission fees.
However, despite having the pos, it also has its negative. one of the most important ones is it restricts the humans who do not have sufficient money. To elaborate, most of the population live below the poverty line due to which they are hardly paid for their basic expenses. Hence-forth, the entry ticket of art galleries and historical places should be free by which everyone gets to benefit from it.
To conclude, although, free entry will help poor people to watch it, I opine that admission charges will aid to boost the economy as well as
to maintain this place effectively. In contrast to coverup it lawmakers charge just a small chank of money from individuals which will be beneficial for both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8418972332 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65164076332 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0129411702 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28533112508 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995386718358 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114202430905 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149885565028 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491351662235 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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