In some nations old people are highly valued but in others young ones has more value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
This is a fact that in today’s competitive era management and good decision making skills are highly in demand. In some nations young people are encouraged to take important decisions for the progress of nation but in other countries still older people are considered as a valuable asset for them. According to my point of view young talent should be motivated instead of old people.
On the one hand, a few people put forward the argument that in some cultures senior citizens has more powers as compared to youngsters because of considerable reasons. Firstly, experience is first priority in every part of life in today’s contemporary era as an experienced person can manage everything properly than a fresher and this quality could be found in elder people who has been working for a long time period. Consequently, majority of nations still rely on older people due to have such qualities. Secondly, taking always right decisions is another quality of old ones as they have patience and understanding. Therefore, they always take right devisions which leads to positive results that only benefit society but also contributes in the development of country. To exemplify, in most of countries still residents of the country choose older person as their prime minister during elections for smooth running of operations of the nation. Most importantly, companies needs good policy makers who can enhance productivity and profitability of the company as well as give back to the society.
On the other hand, according to my opinion youngsters should take responsibility of nation. Several reasons are contributing in this trend that i am going to explain. First of all, young ones are more talented and innovative as they grow in modern technology and this is totally different than than old times. As a consequent, they can bring innovations in every field of the country. Besides this, unlike older ones, young people are strong physically such they have rich eyesight power and physical ability. In addition, if new methods of working will be adopted then any country can get success. Also, being dynamic is required for getting success so youngsters are more adaptable and can encounter every situation.
To conclude, although old people has some unique qualities such as experience, patience, decision making skills and communication skills and are valuable for some nations yet I believe that young people are the future of any country so more chances should be given to them for taking obligations in upcoming time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16788321168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78294024812 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54501216545 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8763452279 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218618349007 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645455273914 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575924956414 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150399189506 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390137867239 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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