In some countries, people are now buying fewer new things and buying more second-hand things instead. In your opinion, what are some possible reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
his is a fact that now a days majority of people prefer to buy used things instead of buying new stuff. While I believe that buying second-hand appliances rather that new, has several positive impacts, it can lead some negatives for the society too. Now I am going to discuss both the positive and negative impacts.
On the one hand, At present the buyers keenly interested in buying pre owned products and goods and occasionally go for new things. First of all, sometimes old things provides much more benefits than new ones as if they would buy the things that are already in use then consumers think that it could be used for long time. However, many times it happens that when somebody buy new products that sometimes don’t work properly so they have to spend money for repairing and maintenance. As a result, people’s first priority is to buy second-hand things which are long-lasting, Secondly, from the point of view of cost, in case of new products they have to allocate large amount of money that is a big expenditure but they can buy used things in almost half prices. Therefore, in these days people buy second-hand things. Finally, secondary products promotes recycling process in the society that is really important to cut wastage in the society. Moreover, this is not only cost-effective but also makes the society a better place to live.
On the other hand, per my point of view along with positives the trend also has some potential negative impacts. Firstly, techno advancements are taking place day by day in fact, these are incredibly important to survive in the fast paced world. So, people should buy new and creative things as much as possible to be modern being that in today’s world innovation plays a significant role in every field of life. Besides this, buying old things are less reliable and sometimes do not work efficiently likewise new ones. That is why, people should spend money on new products rather that spending monthly on repairing old ones. One of the most benefits of new products is that it provides large variety of goods that is absent in Second hand goods. Eventually, instead of buying damaged goods people should buy innovative products so that they can take advantage of new features as well as used products are time-consuming.
To conclude, although secondary goods has some positive impacts yet I think that it’s negative impacts surpasses its positive impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, in fact, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78832116788 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47183027036 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479318734793 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 411.0 20.2975951904 2025% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1968.0 106.682146367 1845% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 411.0 20.7667163134 1979% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 212.0 7.06120827912 3002% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388758127974 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.388758127974 0.084324248473 461% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242427425386 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899031034303 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 206.6 13.0946893788 1578% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -337.23 50.2224549098 -671% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 162.4 11.3001002004 1437% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.87 8.58950901804 313% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 166.4 10.1190380762 1644% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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