Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Indeed, children are often pampered with a multitude of kinds of toys. Although this is considered beneficial for kids in many ways, either in education or relaxation, the downsides will be far more significant.
There are a great deal of merits of providing children with numerous toys. First, a wide range of toys can stimulate creativity in children from early on. In fact, many of toys require children to think and solve problems, like puzzle and lego blocks, which in turn to foster their cognitive development. Second, toys keep children entertaining when parents are busy. This means that they will not feel neglected by their caregivers since they find toys attractive and fun for different colours, sounds and other functions.
Nevertheless, there are a whole host of drawback of this issue. First, toys are expensive, less money is spent on other necessities and future need. For example, low-income family can not afford for their kid's toys as they have to cover the bills and prioritize other basic needs, such as food and clothes. Second, by indulging children with a lot of toys, they can become unsociable. It is clear that most of the toys are for playing indoors, kids lack social skills and go out less for outdoor activities, like playing football and go swimming.
In conclusion, toys are conducive to children's relaxing and cognitive thinking, they do harm than good in many ways. By combining with other physical skills, parents will help their offsprings to have both physical and mental development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66190286888 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2969331781 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268177707573 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905783195692 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427581274399 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157428463663 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597709569957 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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