Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Some children know the feeling of playing with a lot of different toys since their parents buying it.
This essay provides advantages and disadvantages for kids surrounded by playthings.
The main disagvantage is satiety with toys. The infant can become more greedy because of knowing that he receive a new toy
easily or maybe with just a little heristation of parents. It contributes a bad behavior when the kid does not value what
he has, may to break a toy freely or throw it away and be capricious fow a new entertainment. Additionaly, more toys is a reason
of more chaos in a living place with all place what they take for keeping. It could be several drawers or even a closet.
On the other hand, there is positive influence on the development of imagination of baby without a lack of playthings.
More interactivity appears and ways to group toys for new plays. A baby learns the world throught things, therefore their
number is equal to the amount of new knowledge. Also the emergence of new toys is a reason for joy.
Altogether, it is worth to consider profits and damage from wide alternatives of toys for a kid syne behaviour and development
of child depend on it. Flightiness and affection deficit are frequent consequences whereas short cheers from new things and evolution
in cognition of the surrounding world .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at to start education at the age of four would be better both for children and th...
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Suggestion: then
...cialization for children. Consequently, than earlier kids come to school, than faste...
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Suggestion: socialize
... come to school, than faster they would socialized and successfully they can be in future....
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Suggestion: in the future
...socialized and successfully they can be in future. Soft skills are the competencies which...
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Suggestion: economic
... stay at home that leads to slowdown of economical growth. For instance, when women had be...
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Suggestion: economic
...ents develop their career and improving economical situation in country. To summarise, f...
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Suggestion: economic
...ore employable population for providing economical growth.
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...lation for providing economical growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27377521614 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87849372937 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544668587896 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.976147743 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.769230769 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234089648443 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098863071161 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662005675035 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163365073957 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683137955173 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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