Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
A couple of parents purchase their kids whatever they apply for , and allow their kids to do whatever want.Accordingly, a couple of reasons will be explored in this essay. Conspicuously, supply kids needs and wants is important specifically by their parents because such treatment can be creat self reliance for their kids.For instance such kids with having self-reli ance can establish a promising performance in them life.Moreover, family experts believe that , if only all parents could endorse their kids for having a potent society because individuals who have self reliance live on it.There for, it is argued that , such parents and their kids have a fabulous relationship with self-reliance. Nevertheless,such treatment from parents can be provide persistent predicament for kids because they will have a dependent personality.For illustrate, such kids when encounter a challenge can not solve their hardship alone .furthermore,psychologists assert that, this displeasing attribute lead to isolate in kids.Thus, It is believe that were it not for their parents , they would have an acceptable. It is evident that,pay meticulous attention to kids by their parents is harmful for them beacons they can not assert their capability in their life.For more specific this kids afraid of new experience and for this reason their talent do not emerge.In addition,scientists believe that,this treatment with kids leads to turn a blind eye to their genious.Hence, it is argued that , it is high time,all parents altered their approach with their kids for displaying skills in their kids. In summary, a number of parents would rather give their children everything they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.I am of the opinion that, all parents have an acomplishment for their kids and it is promising future but they should option the best method for cultivating them under the proper condition. If only programs on tv would make productivity educational programs for family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30342508639 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.6410768 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 279.5 106.682146367 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 20.7667163134 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8333333333 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437406924627 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263912073163 0.084324248473 313% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13557575341 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.437406924627 0.151304729494 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.9 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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