some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Good parenting is expressed to children by showing love and affection towards them. children are given anything they want from their parents and are permitted to do as they please not considering the outcome of their actions. Allowing children to behave as they want has negative impact on these children later in life and it will be too late for parents to correct them.
To begin with, given children anything the demand for in life will exposure these children to what is beyond them. it has shown that children without restrictions easily deviate in the society,because of peer pressure influence and to meet up with the standard of friends request. For instance,if an iPad phone is given to junior secondary pupil to school, this will attract more friends to him. More so, Some of his colleagues may give him money so they can have access to the phone. this will give the child opportunity to know how to spend money which the parents may definitely not be aware of.Hence,predisposing the child to stealing in adulthood.
Further More, given children what they demand for always by the parents also make them to be lazy and less productive when they are fully matured. Most of these children believe that the parents and wealthy and influential in the society. they believe if they work or not they will be affluent like their parents so they Will not want to work hard to achieve their own wealth. Such is seen among Nigeria political children , since their parents are rich their request can be granted any time. this may cause these children to indulge in use of substance as they have money for it.
In conclusion, although it's will be appreciated by children if their parents can afford to meet their want but granting it always can have adverse effect on the children later in life like stealing and use of drugs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76340694006 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55919979286 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501577287066 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3605106495 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493432062067 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193848512643 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949259423634 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337227827082 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122046443133 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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