Many international sports events were held in different nations, such as the Olympics or the world cup in South Africa. Despite being well-known by sports lovers worldwide, other people think it exerts a detrimental effect on their daily life aspects and finances. In my opinion, the second statement partially convinced me for some reasons.
On the one hand, holding an international event such as the world cup could benefit the hosted nation and the citizens. There would be more job opportunities for the unemployed because preparing a large-scale event required a lot of human resources. Furthermore, the event could stimulate the development of the economy and an excellent chance to be well-known globally. For example, South Africa organized the world cup in 2010, and there was a famous MV “Waka Waka” on youtube to advertise this event. After that, South Africa's economy and tourism rose dramatically after a year.
On the other hand, the drawback of an international event is similar to the hidden part of floated ice. It cannot be seen easily and hidden as detrimental to a nation’s budget. For instance, the Olympics held by an anonymous government cost a lot to be well-prepared, from the workforce to financial condition. Hence, that country is likely to be in debt that cannot be loaned within years but decades because money is the critical point to hold this enormous scale sports event. Furthermore, the locals are forced to relocate because the sports festival needs space to build a vast stadium containing thousands of tourists and spectators.
In conclusion, hosting an international sport could stimulate a country’s economy and tourism. However, that nation could bear a substantial financial burden that will take time to be paid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Waka
...cup in 2010, and there was a famous MV “Waka Waka” on youtube to advertise this event. Af...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...cals are forced to relocate because the sports festival needs space to build a vast st...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20350877193 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92389567139 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4765790704 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113199271059 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371858901394 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349738735047 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691490098452 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214232103525 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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