Some people agree that trains are better transportation between cities. However, some argue that planes are better.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although taking the train brings passenger paying less cost, it is believed that having high speeds can only be found when people choose the airplane being main transportation.
On the one hand, general assumptions claim passengers can control their financial to be economical to move to the other places by taking the train. Why does this happen? the government are more likely to give the fund especially for public facilities, being accessed by people going to other areas. Indonesia government set the regulation in PT. KAI Indonesia that the cost spent for passenger taking train is almost 10% of budget given, and since being satisfied, workers can be more welfare. Therefore, I assume that the train can be categorised the better transportation to ease workers move to cross the city.
That said, by taking the airplane to go other areas, people moving to different areas will be faster to arrive. The airplane is constructed by advance technology that the material and engine have specification of aircraft, leading to them having high speed. This is way the Boeing 777 have the manufacturer of technology combined with general electric GE9X, recording with speed around 892 km/h. Hence, should passenger consider, the type of vehicle can be influence on the time spent.
To conclude, people can save money more when they travel by train, while other believe if they want to be arrived faster, they can get the airplane. Where possible, people can choose vehicle based on their needs and businesses, gaining the alternative way to go.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...taking the train. Why does this happen? the government are more likely to give the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11023622047 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64797659045 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7328783586 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074756292607 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029414733695 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354008260499 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472739287539 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259053434804 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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