There is a discussion between people about the way how to be a leader, some believe that leadership is given, when other believe it can be learned. This essay will look into both arguments.
Leadership is how modern society see good manager. From the one hand, one group believe, leadership is unique sense people are born with. Leadership corresponding together with so called common sense, which I believe is now called more often " rare sense" as nowadays many people show lack of it. Over my carrier as a nurse and paramedic I have had many managers, who mastered their managers skills, however they did not have sense of leadership. Managing group of people is challenging role and does not matter if for business or pleasure purposes.
From the other hand, universities offering programs focused on Leadership and management, when students are taught how to master it. Study program contains wide range of subjects based on practice or research and mostly developed by outstanding individuals in this profession. Students after finishing this course should be ready to excel in their profession and ready to lead their group. However, this study program does not contain any psychology study, which in my opinion is essential part for good leaders, as they have to understand each individual.
To sum up, in my opinion I believe, that leadership could be learned some how. However, if person does not have the common sense, he will be less likely good leader despite all thing he learned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...lieve, that leadership could be learned some how. However, if person does not have the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.056 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63816906206 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9511536073 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2307692308 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308520212273 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102804707422 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134424639994 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220877215668 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16058790659 0.056905535591 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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