Some people argue that air travel should be restricted due to pollution and excessive fuel consumption.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that air travel is the most popular travel mood for today's world. Whereas, some sections of society deem that flights should be restricted because of air and noise pollution and consumption of excessive fule. However, I disagree with the statement because this is not practically possible in this modern era.
To embark upon, air travel is one of the busiest modes of transportation in today's world, because the majority of people use flights to migrate to other destinations and for in-bout ( within country) travel. This transportation mode provides good amenities to their consumers and also save their time as well. For instance, many businessmen first preference is always flights, due to this nation generate a good source of income through air tickets tax and some other things. It helps maintain the national economy. In addition, this sector provides a million jobs employment, if people should be restricted to use the flight then many people should be restricted to use the flight then many people should lose their jobs.
In the same vein, there are three are ways to transportation air, water and road. All these run by fuel consumption, air travel is not the only model who use excessive fule if air travel is restricted due to pollution then it is an inappropriate solution for the people and nation as well. For instance, many countries depend on air travel income to develop their country. Like Thailand is a place, which rely on travel and tourism they earn millions of money through air travel, this money utilizes in their national development. Moreover, to overcome pollution people should use public transport and curb to use of private vehicles, this is a good way to resolve this problem.
Therefore, on the basis of all the points discussed till now and by my personal experiences as well, I would like to state in conclusion that air travel is essential for a traveller and also helps to maintain the economy of the nation
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te to other destinations and for in-bout within country travel. This transportati...
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Line 4, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lopment. Moreover, to overcome pollution people should use public transport and c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95166163142 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69718310254 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6254620593 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296283073646 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103467710345 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884209206242 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188859365638 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729032318643 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te to other destinations and for in-bout within country travel. This transportati...
^^
Line 4, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lopment. Moreover, to overcome pollution people should use public transport and c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95166163142 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69718310254 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6254620593 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296283073646 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103467710345 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884209206242 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188859365638 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729032318643 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.