Some people argue children should stay in school until the age of 18 while others think that 14 years is long enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people argue children should stay in school until the age of 18 while others think that 14 years is long enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a common opinion that it would be better for young once to have school education period until they get eighteen years, whilst others disagree and support idea to finish it at fourteen. This essay agrees that earlier school graduation is beneficial to students.
Long-lasting first education provide children comfortable and familiar environment to maintain their focus only at tuition. Moreover, learners can use their accumulative background and networks in order to prepare better for exit exams. It is therefore agreed that non-stressed atmosphere and habitual general orbit bring self confidence for schoolers. In other words, before entering the university school leaver could boost knowledges without struggling to external opinion regarding his image, for instance.
However, many disagree and feel that spending four extra years at school is useless and even harmful for future development. Mainly routine, repeated surrounding and absence of any stress, limits the progress. At the age of fourteen young man face up with first significant decision considering about higher education within particular direction. As the result, instead of being in comfort zone this man starts new chapter of educational process with full responsibility for his or her future.
In conclusion, while the benefits of long continuance for the first stage of education allowing children to keep mental health and gradually move to college or university, some still feel that leaners should be more proactive and took ownership for their future earlier than at the age of eighteen. However, as long as we carefully consider earlier decision making for young once bring benefits for future progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43252595156 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69539734441 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0974287253 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301677552222 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117510249993 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204320492943 0.0667982634062 306% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260416144744 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.370422845902 0.056905535591 651% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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