Nowadays, art playsa vital role to attract tourists in order to that it bhoots the economy of nations. While the idea is that government had better spend chunks of money on basic needs of citizens as against art. Thus, I somewhat, agree with this statement and I will discuss my view points in up coming paragraphs.
On the one hand, I deem that government should allocates some amount of money on public facilities which is extremely beneficial for their spectacular growth. In another words, if people have all opportunities from their native place, then they will lead a healthy lifestyle sans any difficulty. For example, if a student go towards other nation for completing their education therefore, he or she needs to hefty amount of money. But, if government improve the education system in every part of country, then teenagers will get lucrative job's opportunities and fulfill their dream. As a result, these youngsters become good citizens and give respect to their own nation.
Furthermore, infrastruture is a properity of every country that's why a chunk of money should be allocate by government on this sector, tourists can attract because of beautiful bulidings. Apart from this, if government spend money on perservation of old museums and other bulidings, then teenagers wil esaily enhance their knowledge to visit in these places. However, art also beneficial part of every nation because there are many teenagers, who do not have platforms to show their talent therefore, government had better spend money on this sector and this will immensely helpful for inhabitants who have skill related to this feild.
To sum up, it is lucid that government should allocates money on art and I think that other sectors also need to some investment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10726643599 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74003439037 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6951971166 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191234184504 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715124369541 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571451440893 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121563806864 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247356862781 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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