Some people argue that parents should choose what major should be focused to study at university for their children while others say students should have they own freedom to make a choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have differents views on whether parents should choose university’s major for their children or students should be free in chosing their path. While listening to parents’ advices, student also need to make their own way by selecting the focused major by themselves. It is a highly debatable issue, therefore, both views are discussed before I comment on my opinion.
On the one hand, the most important reasons that parents should choose their children’s major is that parents all are mature, they perceive their children the most and always want the best for their offspring. As teenagers probably may land up in taking wrong decisions about their career, parent have maturity and wise visibility to think of making a suitable career for them. Moreover, parents who give their proneny the best support will provide immense help to their kids by guiding and choosing them a right career path because they do not want to spoil their child’s future by taking a wrong determination.
On the other hand, every child has the right to choose their career, and they also have the right to live a life with their dreams. A child can only know his or her interests and abilities better than anyone else. They know their subjects and areas of interest and thus, can decide their career path quickly. Furthermore, if children choose a career according to the wisher of their parents, they will have a boring academic life as they would face a lack of interest. They will also have to meet a lot of challenges and pressure when following a career path chosen by their parents which is not of their desire.
In conclusion, I believe that parents and teenagers should decide together on the career they would pursue. Teens can get the information about the latest trends while the parents can get their practical experience to the table to make a decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89556962025 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49155559902 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534810126582 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0962868566 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359253105016 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141330328619 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109074048427 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247424116322 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138175961165 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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