Some people argue that technological innovations, such as mobile phone, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary, the advent of techonology contributes to create a lot of inovations such as mobile phones. Some individuals opine that this creation of techonology making the people less socialize with others. I agree with said notion due to lonelieness of the yougester as well as creation of internet and this eassay will articulate my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
There are a plethora of reasons to keep strenghten my point of view. First and foremost, parent are busy ownig to their busy schedule nowadays. So, they let their childern alone in home. To elaborate it, youngesters are used to play games on their mobile phones to make theirselves busy. These habits led to increae the feeling of loneliness in them. Thus, they make themselves less socialize by spending a lot of time alone in home for using the mobile phones. These may led to create them less interactive with others.
Furthemore, not only games, but the invention of internet also make individuals to keep busy on mobile phone.To illustrate it, there are innumerable social media apps that assist to people indulge theriselves keep busy on these apps. For example, facebook, instagram, whatapp and twitter are most preferable apps for using by the individuals. Hence, in these ways internet aid masses to make them less socialize with others.
In conclusion, undoubtely techonology inventions are useful for people, but some inovations are considered bad creations for human being such as mobile phones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19421487603 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82984245723 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557851239669 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1574417727 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229319869967 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737180831643 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726723107036 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133999653325 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345518977559 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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