Some people argue that technologies inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive.
Do you agree or disagree ?
In the modern world, technology has huge impact on our society it makes our life easier and fast . But some people think that new inventions of smartphones make us less socially connect and isolate from social community. I agree with the statement with number of reasons.
On the one hand, technology inventions give us beautiful gift of smartphones which make our life very convenient in every pace of life . It improve the quality of life with many options which we find with the help of internet and many applications for specific tasks. With the help of Social Networking site such as whatsapp, facebook, twitter, Instagram we connect the world to share our ideas and track the activities of others within the few seconds which is never possible before.
On the other hand, people indulge most of their time for using mobiles and not concentrate on other tasks of their life. In earlier time, people spent their free time to face to face conversation and gossiping with each other and make strong bonding in the society. But because of mobile phones our life become self centered and we have not much time for others.
Furthermore, Children spend their time on playing games and surfing on web besides doing some physical activities which improve their physical health as well as mental health. Social sites connect us with all part of the world but we are not aware our neighbour and our surround people very well which is drawback of much use of smartphones. Some applications are ruin our focus capabilities and people are badly addict with some of the social sites which isolate them from their parents and friend circle.
In conclusion, where the mobile phone make our life comfortable and fast it also adverse effect on our physical social intellectual social skills. Usage of mobile phone should be on the basis of its requirement and on a specific time . People should interact with society with their own level not depend upon phones for their social interaction.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92835820896 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47236219835 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3715068997 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202372164478 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077704522624 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574266953319 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130096865304 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577314556896 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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