Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside more suitable.\
What are the advantages and disadvantages ?
In the world, people living in big and small cities and also in countryside. But some people think cities are better place for children growth rather than countryside. Both places lifestyle unique for their own values and structure which provide the facility of life to people according to their requirements. Both have some advantages and disadvantages for children growth which i discuss in this essay.
Firstly, Education is a foundation for any child to making their future bright and good ranked school and colleges provide students a better resource of study with good education which is only held in big cities. Secondly, It is a easy access for students to reach any way of learning centers which are available near to them in cities such as science laboratories, sports centers, which are far from countryside students. Thirdly, students have much opportunities to participate in many activities such as quiz competitions, exhibition fairs and sports activities which are much prefer to arrange in cities. On the other hand, living in cities also have its drawbacks. in cities children spent much time in study because of many activities in their schedule which become burden and stress for them. In addition to living in cities child has not near to the nature and not much open spaces for playing which affect his physical growth. Food taken by the children in the cities have not much nutritional values and they prefer much junk or processed food.
Apart from the cities living in the countryside is much pleasant environment and free from pollution and noise. Children in countryside much connect with natural surroundings such as fresh air, plants, water,soil and much spaces to play which helps to improve their physical strength. But they are not connect with modern life and technology as much which affect their learning potential. countryside students have lack of resources for study which make it difficult for them to compete in many exams which reduce their success chances.
In conclusion, both the places have their own values and drawbacks according the resources availability to the children. Where the cities provide children better opportunities and advance life however countryside helps to children their grow in natural environment which is essential for their mental and physical health for future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22340425532 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67645176861 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460106382979 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1283000901 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.529411765 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181172086624 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734336077942 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743372898858 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142975675111 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780307930589 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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