In recent times sport plays an indispensable role in people's life. Many sport competitions are organized on the international arenas, which attracts atletes from all of the world. This essay will discuss, why sport is a completely imperative part of the world peace and helps to make world better.
First and foremost, different types of sport events unites sportsman from worldwide. Furthermore, competitions take consideration away from the politics. Sport events, such as Olympic Games, world and local championsips illustrates, that problems between countries can be solved in a different way. During the Olympic games, for instance, all wars and tensions between conflicted coutries are paused, and in this moment both sides can resolve their misunderstanding at the negotiable manner.
Furthermore, the sport events gather not only athletes, but also fans. People follow their teams, watch their games on the stadium among other fans and this atmosphere unites and makes them friendly to each other. They share the positive emotions and discover new cultures, despite the contrary teams. For Instance,in 1980 Olympic Games was conducted in Moscow, and many tourists and fans came to visit the capital of Russia, especially fans from Germany and the USA, notwithstanding Cold War. In short, sport brings people together and relieve the conflicts between them.
In conlusion, this essay disscussed the impact that sport events make in order to build up peace in the world. This essay completely agree with the statement, moreover it is suggest that sport is the most effective weapon against the war and conflicts.
- The Process of Milk Production 56
- Ordinary people try copy famous persons either watching the t.v or reading magazines.reasons of doing this . Do u think it is good or bad? 73
- Ordinary people try copy famous persons either watching the t.v or reading magazines.reasons of doing this . Do u think it is good or bad? 84
- Some people assert that sports help to greater extent to build up peace in the world . Do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nal arenas, which attracts atletes from all of the world. This essay will discuss, why spo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...roblems between countries can be solved in a different way. During the Olympic games, for instance...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...despite the contrary teams. For Instance,in 1980 Olympic Games was conducted in Mos...
^^^
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suggested'.
Suggestion: suggested
...gree with the statement, moreover it is suggest that sport is the most effective weapon...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4094488189 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77409073232 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1733517941 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189332144691 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673588103 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660303341161 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126252975753 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730776912797 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.