With the advent of information technology social networking websites have become immensely popular for making friends online. Some people consider them as an inappropriate means of making friends where as for others chat rooms and social sites are most convenient way of making new friends. In my opinion, making friends online carry unnecessary risks. So it is essential to be careful before indulging in such practices. In this easy, I shall underpin my belief with relevant examples and ideas.
To begin with, crime is rife among youngsters these days, and is the most prevailing and disturbing aspect of the society. According to a recent Cambridge survey cyber crime is the most common offense among teenagers nowadays and is increasing rapidly at an alarming rate.
Cyber criminals follow a typical pattern to trap an individual. This begins with befriending innocent people on the internet. The next step is to gain their trust and confidence. Once a victim is trapped, offenders very cleverly ask them to share their personal details so that they can misuse that data. Hackers use that personal information for the purpose of ransom or sometimes for other crimes such as sexual assault. Besides this, offenders do not disclose their true identity and post fake information about themselves on websites. As a result they manage to get off unscathed.
To conclude, I firmly believe that making friends online with total strangers is a mistake as it can compromise our safety and privacy. Care should be taken while revealing personal information online.
- Ordinary people try copy famous persons either watching the t.v or reading magazines.reasons of doing this . Do u think it is good or bad? 84
- The Process of Milk Production 56
- Some people assert that sports help to greater extent to build up peace in the world . Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Ordinary people try copy famous persons either watching the t.v or reading magazines.reasons of doing this . Do u think it is good or bad? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ra, it is often seen that common people who are fans of popular celebrities try to copy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, such as, it is true, on the whole, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72438162544 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3593870048 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4871576461 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.545454545 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166078487019 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605202931346 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484167384383 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10718071475 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553720750031 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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