some people believe that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. while others believe that advertisements us about new products that may improve our lives.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give an example to support your viewpoints.
Unequvically,advertisements play a prominent role in increasing consumerism. Certain individuals claim that adverts provoke people's interest in unessential items, while opponents argue by asserting that it is a way to make people aware about introduction of new products in the market. However, I believe that both the assessments are accurate in accord with modern trend and this description intends to analyze this in subsequent paragraphs.
Considering former viewpoint, undoubtedly advertisements put a hypnotic effect on people regarding the qualities of any product. Individuals often purchase the unwanted products just for shaming; for being a part of modern world and sometimes for optimal rejuvenation. Folks, especially are much concerned about their social status so they think that by buying more stuff and that too by watching ongoing advertisements, that can enhance their standard in society. Moreover, even if they have a lot of needed items, just for self satisfaction and for mental pleasure they purchase the unwanted products promoted by big firms. For an instance, some people have a pile of clothes to wear,they still feel annoyance while selecting the dress just because they had seen the posters of fashionable costumes introduced by the renowned brands, which are absent in their Wardrobes. Hence, promotions of items merely stimulate the mind to buy redundant things.
As far as the latter perspective is concerned, the primary aim of adverts is to guide masses about introduction of new products in market. People living in remote areas and underdeveloped areas have no source of comprehension for latest articles developed by multinational corporations or reputed brands, for easing human life. Therefore, it the only way to make them aware about the latest items or advancements in an existing ones. Furthermore, it clearly explicates the quality and additional features of a particular product to the consumers and thus make them conscious about each and every aspect of that product. Hence, the role of adverts in modernizing people's life by providing comfort zone, is certainly inexplicable.
In my opinion, advertising a item is demand of an hour and its importance can not be denied simply just because it arouse enthusiasm in people for buying unwanted articles. Without utilizing this medium of communication with customers, it would be challenging for selling units to update people's standard of living.
To conclude, although the strategy of displaying product's features allure customers for buying non-essentail items ,yet its role in modifying the present lifestyle can not be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2240.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51724137931 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25262322804 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583743842365 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2061024144 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.764705882 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8823529412 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1588675133 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511865363018 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285876580697 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880186384013 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336746930272 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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