On living in the changing world with the hurry pace of life, applying means of advertisement to introduce the campaigns, products or brands etc is much more common than in the past due to its effective popularization, but some people think that advertisement still exist limitations which is guessed to be unavoidable.
In the present markets, almost businesses owners are likely to make an advertisement plan to spread their products all-round because this is actually the primary way which netizens will approach the items they want to advertise if compared with other means. Not only helps building the image of the brand or product, but it also the indispenable tool to get turnover as planned.
On the other hand, not an excess to say that using excessively advertisement in many public areas can cause inconvenience to residents. It appears with a dense frequency in several music videos, films as well as audios to such an extent that viewers feel being annoyed. Further and even more importantly, some advertising panels or leaflets even have violent or deceptive content which do great harm to passersby. Therefore, still some people oppose view that advertisement is completely beneficial for our daily lives.
In conclusion, according to me, advertisement or any other things both have two sides at large. Although we have to admit its profitable uses in the commercial industry, we must alert and control the detrimental effects extremely. So advertisement will be the powerful medium to develop markets in the modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...mpared with other means. Not only helps building the image of the brand or product, but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19277108434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97889112896 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678714859438 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2322960461 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.3 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211843345876 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773382985009 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419260342612 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119781602442 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199558302623 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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