: Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is sometimes argued that people’s decision in purchasing products is significantly influenced by advertisements from producers while some individuals think that this is hardly effective. From my point of view, despite the futility of advertising in certain situation, I still believe that it greatly affects consumer choice.
To begin with, promotions and dense coverage of product ads easily capture the attention of buyers. Firstly, it is undeniable that a person can barely ignore promotional items even though they have no demand. For example, Apple's latest phone lines are always receiving huge purchases because of their superior features and impressive promotions that drive people's shopping needs. Furthermore, the dense appearance of advertisements on multimedia channels and on roads brings high efficiency in accessing to customers. This not only boosts consumer demand but also helps increase sales for companies and businesses.
On the other hand, it is no good in persuading individual’s shopping decision. The main reason is that some people have the habit of tightly controlling their personal spending. As a result, they are not easily attracted by commercial advertisements from manufacturers. Moreover, most of the advertisements are always unrealistically depicting the quality of the goods. It is because although advertising may appeal to individuals in terms of appearance, it is the quality of the product that matters to them. For example, when buying a piece of clothing, people tend to consider the fabric and the size that suits them, not for the beauty that has been modified when the models wear it.
In conclusion, Advertising obviously plays important role in promoting people’s habit behavior. It is advisable that consumer should make smart decisions in spending money to buy products through the advertisements of producers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Apples the latest'.
Suggestion: Apples the latest
...hough they have no demand. For example, Apples latest phone lines are always receiving huge p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57543859649 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13923139901 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4221483451 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168812816202 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534453007532 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358409964938 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105724359656 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335497647716 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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