In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
It is true that in some parts of the world, the majority of the residents would prefer to live a rental house instead of purchasing a permanent one. From my point of view, there are both benefits and drawbacks for this situation.
To begin with, renting a home is beneficial for financial savings as well as relocation. First of all, people can save money buying a house to invest in other profitable projects. Indeed, not everyone can afford to pay a large sum of money for owning a home and then have to pay for furnishing and home repairs. Therefore, instead of worrying about a long-term debt, we are able to rent a cheap house and spend money on smart investments that improve our quality of life. Moreover, it is advantageous for moving in a new better place to suit the work of family members. For instance, according to a recent survey done in, many Japanese people often move new place because the nature of their work makes the feel uncomfortable when they are only in old one.
On the other hand, being bound by rules and untrustworthy landlords are negative factors affecting individual’s decision. Firstly, tenants must follow all the rules written in the tenancy agreement. For example, some landlord doesn't allow you to keep pets in the house and park in their area. Furthermore, people are likely to get troubles with landlords who are dishonest with their policy. This is because they can increase their rent at any time and delay in maintaining the appliances in the house. Consequently, people have to higher rents and repair furniture by themselves in their rented house.
In conclusion, renting a home has many merits and demerits in certain aspects. It is suggestible that every individual should make the most informed decision in choosing the suitable type of housing effectively meeting their standards of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89776357827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69829444351 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607028753994 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3670402493 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255359908731 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760366125089 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634889821955 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134020913111 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508255919351 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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