Many people hold the view that the purpose of going to university is to get well-paid jobs, while others think that university education brings wider advantages for both individuals and society. This essay will discuss both view and reach a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, those who advocate the aim of higher education is to get better jobs have ample justifications for their statements. The first reason is that in today's modern society, many companies require a university qualifications for a particular position in their jobs. In other words, the job market nowadays is very competitive, if you do not have appropriate qualifications for the job you want, you will rarely have the chance to promote your career. Moreover, the cost for getting in a university is expensive, if the purpose is not to get better paid jobs, people will not spend such a large amount of money to get this education. For example, the tuition fees for a seminar in RMIT University in Viet Nam costs over 100 millions VND, this amount of money is enormous for an average family to study in this university.
On the other hand, those who think that going into a university is important argue that the benefits of higher education are wider for particular person and community rather than just to get a high salary job. First of all, study higher education can help student develop independence. That is to say, to go into a college or university, students may live far away their parents and must take care of themselves. For instance, they have to live alone and cook by themselves, these things will help them to be more confident and independent. Second of all, if everyone study at university, the level of education of the country will increase. As a result, the rate of crime will decrease and people have a sense of security and increase well-being. Moreover, this will boost the economy of the country and the quality of education and medical as a whole, people will live happily without crime.
In conclusion, although it is partly true that people study university to get high salary jobs in some case, i still support the view that university brings us much more benefits for both individuals and community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84920634921 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72869331288 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.545581564 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365398788578 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12115233131 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971935746103 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260764416022 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776271465389 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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