Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important.In my opinion, free time very important for life but on the other hand, we need to watch there develope to know what you son, daughter wrong to fix them.
Lets talk about first opinion i think when you life are long enough you can know that free are very important, but what if when you free so much? you will just think for yourself and not know where can you go, what do you want and no one take care of you. But when you are controlled to much by your family that hard to have a private time
On the other side, when you are controlled you will more kind but maybe you will be shy and hard to have friend. But that make you get higher score and you have the care by your family when you sick, make wrong thing etc.... one more time, what if when you have to much care by your family? maybe you think you want to escape them and want to have free, that is one of reason make you be mental and and have bad morale.
In conclusion, every family need to balanced the free and the care for your children, but if you want to know what your son, daughter want you can ask and know their opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17624521073 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94942739584 2.80592935109 69% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471264367816 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0085223605 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.25 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195766081736 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107010098346 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220172186616 0.0667982634062 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196566906105 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.284097983602 0.056905535591 499% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.56 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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