It is believed by few individuals that people can become selfish in the community while allowing the teen ager to make them their own choices in such matters.whereas the opponents think that it is beneficial for them in taking decision. I will discuss both these points along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs
On the one hand , the decision made by children will make them selfish.The reason behind is that, they are habitual to make their own choices of such things like food, shelter and entertainment. Due to which, they will become selfish in their adults age and they will only think for their own benefits. To illustrate this, it is scientifically proved that the habits which become once in childhood will remained same in their adults ages also and they will aonly think about themselves and their future.
On the other hand, children can know about their responsibility. As, the decision can be taken by the children of their life and their career. So that, they always take right decisions regarding their future plan,with which they will not faced any difficulty in their life. Thus, their future will be secure. Apart from this, the maturity level in children will be increased. The reason of this is that, while taking the decision by themselves as aware the teen agers towards their society. Therefore, they will be understand them.
Atlast, the teen agers should take decision by themselves but under the supervision of their parents.
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is impo 56
- Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99183673469 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58319500311 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534693877551 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8863954415 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.916666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266559928771 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107830628309 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752661689018 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160112052026 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715887303181 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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