The lives of people are not safe with the absence of death penalty and offence of violence inclines. To reduce this crime , the punishment of death penalty is necessary. I am partial with this opinion due to the upcoming reasons
To commence with this, the punishment of death penalty can control the offence of violence as, this punishment is high level of punishment from other so that the every individuals have the fear of it. With the fear of it , the criminals will also decline their crime in the society. To illustrate this, in 1992 the terrorist blast the bomb in taj hotal of mumbai in which the so many people died then and the central authority of india gave the death penalty to that criminals. After that, the crime rate has declined in our domestic country. Moreover, the offence which happens again and again can fall. The reason behind is that, with the fear of death penalty the criminals stop to do crimes . By which, the crime rate will fall.
However, the every individuals have the right to take another chance because, sometime they fight with another person due to their aggression with which , they are the victim of such hazardous punishment and can loss their lives . Apart from this, with the absence of death penalty the criminals can do their crime independently. Since, they have no fear of any punishment. Due to which , the quantity of offence will rise .
At last , rhe punishment of death penalty is must for criminals but, first crime should be interogated by higher authorities then the punishment should be given according to their crime
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is impo 56
- Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81918819188 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46730395428 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472324723247 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6605162683 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249506839707 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944584585225 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782565164469 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173050111404 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607249545324 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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