People have different view about whether children should be allowed to make their own decision on their routines or not. While there are some benefit in do not give them freedom in their own choices, I personally believe that giving them right to make choices by themselves is more productive.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why children should not be let choose their normal matters by themselves. First of all, it is an irrefutable fact that since they do not have enough experience, they probably choose inaccurately and make lots of mistakes. Secondly and even more importantly, though, if parents give them all of rights, they will be spoiled. One particularly example of this is children who grow up in only child families. Since their parents give them enormous freedom and let them do everything they want, and there are no limitation for them, they are so pampered. Finally, this trend promotes inflexibility among children and children cannot tolerate problem and opposite idea in future; therefore, it would have detrimental impact on society and their social lives and their relationships.
On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to give them opportunities to make their own choices. One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that children cannot be excellent decision makers unless they make mistake repeatedly, and learn from their errors. Admittedly, this attitude may lead to be selfish and bring up people who only consider themselves and think about their own lives without thinking about others. Nonetheless, I would contend that this kind of upbringing installs self-confidence and self-esteem in children, and we can attribute it to have confident and strong individuals in future. Therefore, it is reasonable to surmise that causing to build many good traits in children, allowing kids to choose what they want to wear, eat and their hobbies would be a good idea.
By way of conclusion, although I can understand why forbidding kids to make their choices is vita, it seems to me that letting them decide about issues that have effect on them is more desirable.
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 78
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 78
- the plans below show the layout of a university sports center now and how it will be look after redevelopment 73
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 61
- in a numbers of countries some people think it is necessary to speed large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transportdiscuss both views 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0566572238 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74492408905 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535410764873 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6001533123 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293734019412 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109361824806 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823187078505 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199106803643 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993097579588 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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