some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect the. Discus both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, childhood considers important stage in the life of people and sends indicators about their future. Few people think that, it is very significant to let children care about daily habits such as selecting their food, wearing their suits, and watching media which they interest. Others believe that, children should care about their action related to them just only. Personally, I feel giving children a freedom to choose their daily action. This can lead to open-minded generation.
To begin with the first argument, some people think adults should take decision about everyday matters. So that encourages youngsters to have dependence sense and having clear vision about real world. In addition, this dependence increases a confidence inside them and draw clear picture about their future. For example, Finland country follows this policy and reach today to generation has the best leaders around the world. Moreover, delivering children everyday matters could increase supervisory and leadership skills. as consequence, this dependence boosts the character of children and creates conscious generation.
On the other hand, other people believe that, children should have decision about their interest. So that, kids can enjoys in their life and create small world for their dreams. These dreams can lead to adults who care about their hobbies to create smart persons. Additionally, hobbies train brains of children and simulate the life which face them later on. As a result, children should have their own world to have ability to work and study.
To sum up, some thinkers believe that kids can lead everyday matters such as cooking and selecting suitable clothes. However, others believe that, kids should care about their businesses only. I totally agree that, children can take chance to manage daily action to prove themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42272548289 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4253565061 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1052631579 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338513019889 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107471073535 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779091768901 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21592528329 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565764777773 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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