Countries becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Undoubtedly, the world becomes a small village because the development which happen in technology sector. Countries produce approximately the same products and people in some countries have as same as persons have in the countries such as cars, computers, and phones. I strongly agree drawbacks of production same products outweigh advantages and reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs to reach a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, many people believe that the similarity of products kill competition between companies around the world. Another point worth noting is a privacy, if all countries produce the same products, this lead to kill the character of each country. To cite an example, a study has been conducted in china showed 80% of the output of some industrial countries is similar than others. Moreover, the similarity of products destroys the competition and diverse between states. To put it simply, not only the production process for products should be unique between states but also this process should be unique between companies.
On the other hand, some people argue that the union of products around the world encourage trade between countries, this lead will increase competition and encourage countries to develop their products and improve the infrastructure of factories. To show an example, China produces the same technology which Japan produces and the result is the humanity has earned two industrial countries. To repeat shortly, the production of same products consider advancement.
To draw a conclusion, although, the production of the same items can achieve development, but this process might destroy a diversity and privacy for society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45627376426 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89111933966 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539923954373 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5280952887 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263111016297 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10280468726 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452543765663 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163409488754 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525919294903 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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